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My fan story of Bruno Mars: Broken Down Blues

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  • My fan story of Bruno Mars: Broken Down Blues
    March 13 2011 / FlyyintoMars
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    I will try to keep this as PG-13 as Possiable! Key word try, so if i go out of hand, oh well! El Oh El! I'll make every part a diffrent discussion. i'll post the links to my profile

    INTRO:

    I'm Looking down at my daughter. Damn dose she have her fathers eyes. Big & brown, kinda like a puppy. They just draw you in. everything about her is him, the way she laughs, how she thinks, she the girl version of him..

    I hold her as she goes back to sleep & I start to cry. Damn I miss him so much. His touch, his cinnamon smell, his humor, his morning love making, everything. Even though I miss him, but I couldn't stand the Secrets, the holding in, the closed-off-ness of him. As tears roll off my cheeks, I start to sing out My Broken Down Blues.

     

    Chapter one

    http://www.brunomars.com/forums/8d9efc-broken-down-blues-chapter-one/

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on March 13 2011

I will try to keep this as PG-13 as Possiable! Key word try, so if i go out of hand, oh well! El Oh El! I'll make every part a diffrent discussion. i'll post the links to my profile

INTRO:

I'm Looking down at my daughter. Damn dose she have her fathers eyes. Big & brown, kinda like a puppy. They just draw you in. everything about her is him, the way she laughs, how she thinks, she the girl version of him..

I hold her as she goes back to sleep & I start to cry. Damn I miss him so much. His touch, his cinnamon smell, his humor, his morning love making, everything. Even though I miss him, but I couldn't stand the Secrets, the holding in, the closed-off-ness of him. As tears roll off my cheeks, I start to sing out My Broken Down Blues.

 

Chapter one

http://www.brunomars.com/forums/8d9efc-broken-down-blues-chapter-one/

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TheHawaiianLioness's picture

Oh. My. Gosh. What the f*ck was up with my first comment?!?!

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No Dori, that's Alicia

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Is this the mother??

candy552's picture

:O

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Wow i found my intro

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@ UptownDownload EL OH EL! I remember BUMP but never knew what it ment.

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cinnamon smell though lol
bump

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@KiranMars & @MJLuckyStar Thankx

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yes it's about bruno

TheHawaiianLioness's picture

Is the story about bruno?

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LMAO :D good story bdw

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wow this is good so far(: