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"Spot Light" - For Bruno

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  • "Spot Light" - For Bruno
    August 29 2012 / babybluzj2b
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    I wrote this poem for Bruno. Let me know what y'all think. It's all hypothetical/ creatively made by me. So hope you like it.

    "The Spot Light" by Jackie B.

    Hit the lights. Don't make a move.
    I'm gonna make you feel like you're in a zoo.
    Strike the bass. Remove that lace.
    I'm gonna serenade you til you've got no clue.

    See the stars and kiss me babe.
    You're gonna be with me the entire way.
    See you're the one tonight
    So Slow down and Hit the Spot Light
    The Spot light, Spot light
    Gonna serenade you til you hit that Spot Right.

    Whoa, you're driving fast. Up against the wall.
    Slow it down. Once more. No Do it more....

    See the Stars and Kiss me babe.
    You're gonna be with me tonight. Don't wait.
    You hit the Chord. Got me wanting more and more.

    Just so Ya know, you did it right.
    Now ya know. The Spot light.

    PS. I wrote this after listening to a few of Bruno's Songs.

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on August 29 2012

I wrote this poem for Bruno. Let me know what y'all think. It's all hypothetical/ creatively made by me. So hope you like it.

"The Spot Light" by Jackie B.

Hit the lights. Don't make a move.
I'm gonna make you feel like you're in a zoo.
Strike the bass. Remove that lace.
I'm gonna serenade you til you've got no clue.

See the stars and kiss me babe.
You're gonna be with me the entire way.
See you're the one tonight
So Slow down and Hit the Spot Light
The Spot light, Spot light
Gonna serenade you til you hit that Spot Right.

Whoa, you're driving fast. Up against the wall.
Slow it down. Once more. No Do it more....

See the Stars and Kiss me babe.
You're gonna be with me tonight. Don't wait.
You hit the Chord. Got me wanting more and more.

Just so Ya know, you did it right.
Now ya know. The Spot light.

PS. I wrote this after listening to a few of Bruno's Songs.

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jennyhernandez's picture

oh you have to go on my account page and there all there and I'm still editing chapter 8 so don't read it yet

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I read chapter 7 and commented on it on the original post. Where is chapter 8? I am ready for it :D

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How many chapters have you written? They Appear Really Long!!! I saw you have Seven chapters! You must like to write! Is there a way you can condense it? It's difficult for me to read when there aren't spaces/ indenting in dialogue. I'll read chpt 7 tonight though :D

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yo welcome why don't you do me a favor and read my fanfic?

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Thank you Jenny :D <3

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m gonna try and link this to Bruno it's so cool!